Saturday, June 7, 2008

Blank

how do i measure the distance between two pauses?
pause 1: you
pause 2: the gaps

we create in between the
before
(and the)
after
of everything.

Space is folly.
Proximity is what we fail to

touch.

3 comments:

Richard J.A. said...

I kind of had this kind of line in my NU. I hope u'd noticed it and written blank with it in mind. :-)

hannilou said...

bitaw bad, i admit, this line is not mine. huhu, sakpan ko dah. murag daghan na jud kog traces of ur style in my writing.

and yes, inspired ni sa NU. it was one of my favorite pieces ^_^

Richard J.A. said...

No, the line is so yours, hehe, lingaw lang reading it and tracing some link and I just asked if by some chance deyr connected and am glad to know dey reli r and u wer, as u say, and sobra ko kakurog, inspired. Super ka humbling. :-)